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Hogwarts Overexposed Chapter 5

szaleniec1000 Jul 10, 2014 14:12

Last time on Hogwarts Exposed: the worst hazard when trekking naked through a tropical rainforest is running into a cop who's apparently the long-lost relative of the gang from Chapter 2. Or else the gang from The Gang. Also, the Great One is a goose.

( Hogwarts Overexposed Chapter 5 )

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Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 13

szaleniec1000 Aug 05, 2012 00:45

Chapter 13 is entitled "Halloween Treats", and we all know what kind of "treats" the author has in mind. He's determined to run into the ground a double entendre that wasn't even funny the first time.

( Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 13 )

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Hogwarts Exposed Chapter 9

szaleniec1000 May 07, 2011 21:34

I've not given up. I took a bit of a break because I have to admit this chapter, long and brimming with fail as it is, nearly defeated me. But it hasn't!

( Hogwarts Exposed Chapter 9 )

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